Poetry either strikes at the first glance, or not at all.-
love it,your words speak of a story and it is perfectly done.
This is fun. A wave shaped poem ;) From Tigerbrite at www.planetcyberluz.com
Achchi hai. Nice and short and crisp.:)
The circle never lets up, does it??short, simple and interesting :)
what a positive view of waves!! Lately I read or hear waves and I see/sense trouble. Thanks for the new perspective/reminder :)Enjoy the rally!http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/
A child's view of seashore.
Not all poems bring a smile on my face, but this did. growing close to the sea and beach I feel at home :)
your talent shine through.keep it up.
Love the structure of the poem, really artistic!! The poem itself was simple and lovely, great job.
Love the way you set it out. Wonderful
I love the form! Great job =)
Excellent imagery, Madhumakhi.Well done!
I really like this one. :-)
I love the flow of your words~