Tuesday, May 3, 2011

An Attempt At Alliteration

Street scoundrel slinks stealthily 
along an alley
to pick purses poking from pockets.

Someone stop him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  1. Hi Madhumakhi, Great write! The only thing I would change would be the last line, to give greater effect. I would leave a double space after the third line and then post in bold letters:

    Somebody stop him!

  2. Thanks Elizabeth. I took your suggestion. Will pay your blog a visit once i get the time.