Tuesday, May 3, 2011

An Attempt At Alliteration

Street scoundrel slinks stealthily 
along an alley
to pick purses poking from pockets.

Someone stop him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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3 comments:

  1. UnknownWednesday, 04 May, 2011

    Hi Madhumakhi, Great write! The only thing I would change would be the last line, to give greater effect. I would leave a double space after the third line and then post in bold letters:

    Somebody stop him!

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  2. madhumakhiThursday, 05 May, 2011

    Thanks Elizabeth. I took your suggestion. Will pay your blog a visit once i get the time.

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  3. Paul Andrew RussellSunday, 15 May, 2011

    This is great. :-)

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