Leaping off cliffs is an
Exodus of foolish creatures that
Multiplied too many and gnawed
Most of their pastures barren. They're plunging
Into the treacherous waters of the
Norwegian sea, blindly hoping that it'll
Get them to newer, greener lands.
Some are lucky but they'll repeat the mistake.
Great metaphor for what we've done to our environment. Thanks for visiting my blog!
ReplyDeleteOh this is a powerful message, especially the last line. Well done!
ReplyDeletebrilliant metaphor.
ReplyDeletethis one truly rocks.
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Lovely poem with such an environmental message attached.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes, Eileen
Wow, great metaphor, too.
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And we are... nice parallels.
ReplyDeletepoor lemmings :(
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