Poetry either strikes at the first glance, or not at all.-
these are the worst kind of ghosts!
This is brilliant! You reflected lost souls who have lost their way~ Well Done!
Ooh... I love this. Those ghosts from the past can be haunting.
A chilling thought. Someone who is a ghost before her time.
Clever and well written.
I do know such a ghost..peripherals
sadly a ghostly familiargreat poem
I wouldn't want to cross paths with such a ghost. Excellent take on the theme.
Visiting a second time, this time from Poetry Pantry. I like the shape of this poem, and as Hazel said, I wouldn't want to cross paths with the ghost either.
Powerful poem, a "wake up" call. If real I hope you reach her.
I've met people like this and it's always sad. You captured her mental prison really well.
madhumathi,A very disturbing feel to this poem. Very well captured theme.....Eileen
Killed two birds using one stone. A nice etheree and a chilling message. Haunted is an understatement.Brilliant.