Poetry either strikes at the first glance, or not at all.-
Oh this is too precious Madhumakhi! There's an innocence about this piece that I really enjoy. Keep this innocence and the tanka always.
I love it, Madhumakhi. You write gems.
Excellent form. I'm just tiptoeing into tanka too. They are going to take some getting used to.
I like the continuous flow.
That is just too cool! Loved it! Peace :)
way to go.great Tanka.hope to see you join poetry picnic tonight,week 2 theme: the kiss.Cheers.
you made it well with your first tanka,