Poetry either strikes at the first glance, or not at all.- J.M Coetzee
Oh this is too precious Madhumakhi! There's an innocence about this piece that I really enjoy. Keep this innocence and the tanka always.
I love it, Madhumakhi. You write gems.
Precious!!
Excellent form. I'm just tiptoeing into tanka too. They are going to take some getting used to.
I like the continuous flow.
That is just too cool! Loved it! Peace :)
way to go.great Tanka.hope to see you join poetry picnic tonight,week 2 theme: the kiss.Cheers.
you made it well with your first tanka,
Oh this is too precious Madhumakhi! There's an innocence about this piece that I really enjoy. Keep this innocence and the tanka always.
ReplyDeleteI love it, Madhumakhi. You write gems.
ReplyDeletePrecious!!
ReplyDeleteExcellent form. I'm just tiptoeing into tanka too. They are going to take some getting used to.
ReplyDeleteI like the continuous flow.
ReplyDeleteThat is just too cool! Loved it! Peace :)
ReplyDeleteway to go.
ReplyDeletegreat Tanka.
hope to see you join poetry picnic tonight,
week 2 theme: the kiss.
Cheers.
you made it well with your first tanka,
ReplyDelete