In a dark cave
of location unmentionable,
pleasure is found.
The cave is smelly
like rotten thoughts
and rotten actions.
Its floor is slippery
like dangerous pleasure
from dangerous actions
from dangerous actions
And its walls are sticky
like the consequences
of those actions.
The cave can
trap anyone who
goes too far.
Excellent advise to those willing to trade light for darkness.
ReplyDeleteKisses!
remarkable view.
ReplyDeletelove it.
:)
A frightening and cautionary place, your cave of temptation.
ReplyDeleteliked it
ReplyDeleteThis makes me think of sexual temptation the description of the cave, awesome
ReplyDeleteInnuendo? Or straightforward??
ReplyDeleteCheers
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You've certainly used metaphor to great effect. Well done!
ReplyDeleteHello Madhumakhi.
ReplyDeleteGreat play on words!
Thanks for the visit. Much appreciated. ;-)
Wow, I imagine all sorts of places. Very interesting write.
ReplyDeletePleasure can be enticing.
ReplyDeletemadhumakhi,
ReplyDeleteA dangerous location and perhaps dangerous intentions too!
Eileen
dangerous yet attractive to many,
ReplyDeletewell sent message.
Excellent words. Temptation is often dangerous.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]