Tuesday, July 19, 2011

Dangerous Pleasure

In a dark cave 
of location unmentionable,
pleasure is found. 

The cave is smelly 
like rotten thoughts 
and rotten actions.

Its floor is slippery
like dangerous pleasure
from dangerous actions

And its walls are sticky 
like the consequences 
of those actions. 

The cave can
trap anyone who 
goes too far. 

13 comments:

  1. Excellent advise to those willing to trade light for darkness.

    Kisses!

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  2. A frightening and cautionary place, your cave of temptation.

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  3. This makes me think of sexual temptation the description of the cave, awesome

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  4. Innuendo? Or straightforward??

    Cheers
    CRD

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  5. You've certainly used metaphor to great effect. Well done!

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  6. Hello Madhumakhi.
    Great play on words!

    Thanks for the visit. Much appreciated. ;-)

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  7. Wow, I imagine all sorts of places. Very interesting write.

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  8. madhumakhi,

    A dangerous location and perhaps dangerous intentions too!

    Eileen

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  9. dangerous yet attractive to many,
    well sent message.

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  10. Excellent words. Temptation is often dangerous.

    Anna :o]

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