Saturday, April 23, 2011

My first calligram

My
           pen
                              posed
                                                                                                      over
                                                                                                             paper 
                                                                                                         i 
                                                                                           wonder
                                                                                 what
                                                                                 to
                                                                                write.

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9 comments:

  1. I'd drink up to the last drop of this poison of yours.

    Kiss you. =*

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  2. @ Kenia: thanks for commenting, but i don't understand what you mean by your comment. =* still.

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  3. I don't know what a calligram is, but I like what you did. :)

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  4. A calligram is "a word or piece of text in which the design and layout of the letters creates a visual image related to the meaning of the words themselves", as defined by oxford dictionary.

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  5. A very fine calligram, but it seems that when your fingers (keyboard) began to write, the words and shape came!

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  6. I love the way this looks on the page - very cool!

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  7. creative, love the line,
    lovely shape.
    wow.

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  8. Concrete poetry does much the same thing... Words form a shaped image on the page. It would be interesting to see your words here form the shape of a question mark, perhaps...

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  9. Thank you Jinksy for your suggesting. I've edited the poem.

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