Poetry either strikes at the first glance, or not at all.-
I'd drink up to the last drop of this poison of yours. Kiss you. =*
@ Kenia: thanks for commenting, but i don't understand what you mean by your comment. =* still.
I don't know what a calligram is, but I like what you did. :)
A calligram is "a word or piece of text in which the design and layout of the letters creates a visual image related to the meaning of the words themselves", as defined by oxford dictionary.
A very fine calligram, but it seems that when your fingers (keyboard) began to write, the words and shape came!
I love the way this looks on the page - very cool!
creative, love the line,lovely shape.wow.
Concrete poetry does much the same thing... Words form a shaped image on the page. It would be interesting to see your words here form the shape of a question mark, perhaps...
Thank you Jinksy for your suggesting. I've edited the poem.