Poetry either strikes at the first glance, or not at all.- J.M Coetzee
Scary...cuz it is true.
could be, creepy.
Oh this is a really cool slant on the prompt. There will definitely be some angry ghosts there now, so suddenly gone. Good poem.
This is scary~because of the truth.A different approach to the prompt.Pamela
madhumakhi,Ghosts may well have angry moments with this world indeed.Eileen
Interestingly timely take.
Powerful, there will be more angry ghost I fear.Alaska is likely,next...
A very clever and touching take on this prompt! I hope you and those you love are safe in the midst of the chaos...:)LynetteImagination Lane
It began with such a benign ghost until you wrote in Japan and they were so visible, powerful, and ghastly.
Thanks you all for commenting!
Scary...cuz it is true.
ReplyDeletecould be, creepy.
ReplyDeleteOh this is a really cool slant on the prompt. There will definitely be some angry ghosts there now, so suddenly gone. Good poem.
ReplyDeleteThis is scary~because of the truth.
ReplyDeleteA different approach to the prompt.
Pamela
madhumakhi,
ReplyDeleteGhosts may well have angry moments with this world indeed.
Eileen
Interestingly timely take.
ReplyDeletePowerful, there will be more angry ghost I fear.
ReplyDeleteAlaska is likely,next...
A very clever and touching take on this prompt! I hope you and those you love are safe in the midst of the chaos...:)
ReplyDeleteLynette
Imagination Lane
It began with such a benign ghost until you wrote in Japan and they were so visible, powerful, and ghastly.
ReplyDeleteThanks you all for commenting!
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