Poetry either strikes at the first glance, or not at all.-
nicey :)i could 'smell' the words
hummmmmmm I can smell it... your few words say SO much, I love that unique smell as well!thanks for your visit to my place:)Dulce
First thank you for your correction, second,I enjoy your poem..this was nice and short
@Dulce: thanks for visiting my blog :)@Kodjo Deynoo: thanks for visiting my blog :)
I love that smell of rain when it first hits the earth, especially when the ground is dry and has waited a long time for it......incomparable smell. Lovely poem.
This reminds me of spring or summer rain, parched...then the scent of freshness, renewed!Nicely done~